Haiku

My Attempt At Haiku :-(

Haiku #1 (Courtesy Junior)

The clock goes tick tock
denoting passage of time
and aging of man

Haiku #2

Seasons are changing
Hopefully will get better
Less sweat means more work

Haiku #3

Traffic all over
Cars honk in unision now
United in rush

Haiku #4

Son is in tenth grade
Making me study again
During the cold nights

Exam Haiku

Exams on in March
Kids look forward to summer
Parents want time off

Getting up Early
Worst is having to study
In the cold mornings

8 Responses to “Haiku”

  1. Haiku Page « Bangalore Blues Says:

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  2. Nikhil Says:

    Hehe… Nice ones… I have never tried Haiku… Never tried poetry either! I’m sure I’ll screw it up… :D

  3. Vijay Says:

    @Nikhil: Thats what cool about Haiku.. no rhyming… anyhow you are gifted with great writing skills…

  4. chirax Says:

    :) for the Attempt.

  5. shivya Says:

    I made some miserable attempts at Haikus long ago! Now I’m excited to try it out again.

    I like your 2nd one btw :)

    And I like your blog too. Feeling nostalgic now. Adding you to my roll!

  6. Vijay Says:

    @Chirax: :-)
    @Shivya: Thanks for visiting and blogrolling me :D

  7. Pegah Ahmadi Says:

    i love the second one : … less sweat means more word .
    i will be happy to know your opinion about mine .

  8. Vijay Says:

    @Pegah: Thanks… I am unable to access your blog (says not found).. is there a typo?

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